im too small too realise...
wht d ppl says ..........
in the world of lies..........
too small to feel d..........
feelings of some1 else........
when they .........cry
too small to clarify
b/w good or bad or fukin prophecy
i dont y ppl do want me change
even though i dont affect ,em.........
its better to have a clean head...
rather than a fucked up mind..
its better tht v shld remain human..n..
not to b known as god alive!!!
im too small to realise
i dont know y
when i laugh ppl open their third eye....
"jealousy lies whr sincerity hide....
hypocrisy rise in d democratic night....
fucktupancy rise in d social riot"...
ppl like u n me got twisted
in this bad phase of tyme
im too small to realise....
y v used to run behind
" lust not love"..................................................................!!!
"EVRYDAY.. EVRYTYME..EVRYONE ...
FROM TOP TO BOTTOM LINE.......
HAVE ONLY ONE THNG IN THEIR MIND........
HOW TO GET TOP OF THE LINE..........
THEY DONT CARE ........TO WHOM THEY MAY FIGHT.........."
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19 comments:
after a long time came acroos something against system..well written and presented.
was nt able to realise wt r u tryin to say initially..
bt then i got the gist of gist .
hey good one...did'nt get some sentences though>>
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very nice !!
keep posting !!
I must confess it was hard for me to digest but beautifully written. Keep up the good work buddy.
and i think we all are too small to realise the samhe thngs !
gud one !
You really need to work on the presentation.. I mean "d" instead of "the" and "some1" instead of "someone". They may sound cool to you when having a chat/convo but this seriously doesn't suit a blog. And then I found quite a few grammatical errors..Try to work on it. The overall theme was fine but then all the other things overpower it.
No personal offense meant. IT is just what I think :)
Cheers
a different sort f poem
njoyed readin it n ur new coinin f terms
I checked almost all of your poems, found one thing in common. there are many lingos used..
Just a suggestion that you may try copy paste the draft in Ms Word and make a spell check and then paste in your blog and publish.
Readers would find your poem making more sense and would be more enjoyable.
Keep writing and enjoy :)
a bit confusing but guD!
That was a diff poem from what iv been readin of late...interestin :)
nice but u were writing bad words in between so that I didn't liked other wise it was a nice poem...
Vinayak
When Marshal Mathers 3 (may be) can me Eminem...
Why cant Ghanshyam be "Ghandu Baba"
Anyways nice emotional rockin' rap...
i have compared you with eminem kill me.
and then get clean shaved (got it?)
RAP ON!!!
ROCK ON!!!
GHANDU BABA KI JAI !!!
Shiva
CrAzYbLoG ,
v.CoL (I use the F word here :) )
Hey!nice compositions,all of them!
Work for a while on the grammar and proper use of language. It was an average post otherwise.
Cheers!!
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