another dawn of the day....
in the darkness again..
i m still trying ... to ..
get out of this pain.........
im tired but .........
no one knows............
suffocation is building,...............
could there be any control.......
blame it on me ..
or blame it on destiny!!
it's the faliure ....... i've got...
tht bring myself ........
back to my knee.......
i wish......... thr would be ........
ANOTHER ROOM ON THE ROOF
for me...........!!!
there was so much .....of
me inside myself......
didn't knew.....
i would gonna b ...
totally left ............. behind!!
things changed in a ...
moment of flash........!!
only left with those....ppl
sitting ..beside my ash!!!
blame it on me.. or blame it on destiny!!
its the failure i've got............
tht bring myself ............
back to my knee.......
i wish there would be..
ANOTHER ROOM ON THE ROOF ..........
for me!!!!!!!!!
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14 comments:
Nice one buddy..
clearly i don't understand poetry :)
ur last para is simply great yaar...good one!! really liked it..will come back often..cheers!
kool man even i do write my blogs that way !!
plzzzzzzz check out three poems i have pasted til now ..hope u like it :D
thnxs.. but do chek out d other post as well
nice one...
hey..the mast image is awesome yaar!!
aah..suits me well..
http://blog.poonamparihar.com
Cool one..
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alrdy posted
Interesting ... though quite enigmatic !
An Enchanting One!
Looking Fwd for more frm u!!
i hav always had hard time cracking poetry...and tats the reason am commenting for tis one...thou' u want comments on other posts...tis is the one i liked after 3-4 reads....cheers....may be u can try on diff genre's too.....nice work..carryon..!!!
since i always find it difficult 2 write poetry i read poems in awe
gud one
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